HOLY FUCK HOLY SHIT this fic changed my goddamn life. it's not even funny im not even joking im so serious when i say it's my favorite macdennis fic i've come across and i WISH it'd update sooner. first of all major props for the fall out boy title oh you know i eat that shit up.
i love the characterizations here. my only gripe is i do NOT like the texting in the first three or so chapters there's this one particular part that made me cringe super bad but to be honest it's in character so i'm not holding the author at fault
i think the development of the semi-romance that they've got going on is pretty steady. like this whole thing is set up off of attraction alone, i like that the author acknowledges that in how their relationship goes on. like it's not just "oh we went on one date so now we're in love" honestly for most of the fic it's not very clear that they have romantic feelings but like THERES SUBTEXT IN IT ausghah i could go on about this fic for forever if you let me i swear.
the only reason i took a star off is because IT HASNT BEEN UPDATED IN A YEAR PLEASE DEAR LORD COME BACK AND UPDATE PLEASE I AM BEGGING